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I Could Swim in Her Eyes

They remind me of the deep blue sea

By Marie381Uk Published 4 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

I Could Swim in Her Eyes

I could swim in her eyes forever

deep as oceans warm as night

a look that pulls me under

without a struggle without a fight

Her laughter wraps around me

soft as silk against my skin

I drink the sweetness gladly

knowing love is where I begin

Her lips taste of summer

ripe with promise close and near

every whisper she surrenders

is the only sound I hear

The curve of her body beckons

like a secret only I may know

I follow every motion

where her tenderness will go

Her touch is fire and mercy

a storm that soothes and burns

in her arms I lose my balance

yet every moment returns

I could live inside her presence

a captive who will not part

for her eyes hold my freedom

and her soul keeps my heart

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Calvin London4 months ago

    I want to meet her !!!! You create the image of a goddess. There is something special about someone's eyes that can be mesmerizing. I loved the ending lines: "for her eyes hold my freedom and her soul keeps my heart"

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