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I believe we can change.

LOVE !

By _a_whisper_of_sorrowPublished 5 months ago 1 min read

I believe we can change.

I believe we can still change our lives,

But tell me -

Who are you hoping for tonight?

Don't be unfaithful to your promise of life,

Because life never makes gentle deals.

Even when spring is sunny,

Nor can it melt the chill in your heart.

My youth passed quietly in the shadows -

In my memory of you,

In your cruel silence...

Even so,

I still can't mourn your memory.

Oh, unfaithful man,

Don't exchange your heart for a coin -

The world is dark enough,

Your journey is a narrow and stormy road.

I wandered and fell into meditation,

Wait... Puzzled...

When will your steps come back to me?

When will your end meet me again?

Thank you for reading!

Editing to add an MIR ZAIB:

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_a_whisper_of_sorrow

Exploring the shadows between heartbeats.

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  • Zaryab Abbasi5 months ago

    Amazing 🔥

  • Mohammed Shamem5 months ago

    Heart touching Poetry ❤️

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