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Hymn to Nikkal

A little poem inspired by a video I just watched about the oldest (known) song in history. Well done, YouTube algorithm.

By Roderick MakimPublished 5 months ago 1 min read

Simple strumming

Under the peaceful dark

Stars wheel

Around the moon

The notes pluck

Little pockets

Of time

From one space to

Another

The miracle of music

We can sit under

The same stars

Hearing the same

Strumming melody

And remember

Something so simple

We are the same

And somewhere

Some imaginary goddess

(As unreal as justice)

Becomes real again

For a moment

Love finds her heart

Life lives

In the music

Just for a moment

And she smiles a

Silent benediction

Before vanishing

Again

Into time as the notes

Fade

Into the peaceful dark.

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About the Creator

Roderick Makim

Read one too many adventure stories as a child and decided I'd make that my life.

I grew up on a cattle station in the Australian Outback and decided to spend the rest of my life seeing the rest of the world.

For more: www.roderickmakim.com

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