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Hyacinthus

A Causulty of the gods

By Mother CombsPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
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Born of privilege, the golden son of a Queen and King

His precious birth inspired the laconic Spartans to sing

A charismatic youth who lived a life of royal state

His being gave many the cause to celebrate

So captivating that he had the people’s love

Eventually drawing the eye from Mt Olympia above

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The golden-haired god of beauty fondly took him as a lover

Together, they trod daily in peaceful fields of clover

Ignoring all others, only each other's company they sought

The prince, learning all that the god of light taught

Never suspecting their bond could bring misfortune

The two swains continued dancing to love's enchanting tune

The favored prince’s stunning looks shown

The spring’s messenger coveted him for his own

The wind god looked for a way to entice the man away

He offered his best treasures and boons, hoping to sway

But none of the west wind's beguilements enticed the mortal

Which ended up angering the winged immortal

Human and sunny Olympian continue their romance

Playing in a river meadow, the tow lovers prance

Tossing a discus in a playful game of catch between the two

When in a jealous fit of rage, the jilted god blew

Sending youthful god’s aim off, striking his beau in the head

The Spartan’s golden prince fell to the ground, dead

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The West Wind quickly went on his way, going back to whichever wife

Apollo fell to his knees, embracing Hyacinthus, trying to return his life

Mourning the sudden loss of his lover and his friend

The god of healing, unable to heal, didn’t want his friend’s life to end

Flowers replacing where Sparta’s youthful prince lay

Unable to live without his love, the bereft god eternalized him to this day

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Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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  • Denise E Lindquist10 months ago

    It's great!❤️ They AI photo you created is good too.💗💕

  • Killing Mission 10 months ago

    Beautiful

  • C. Rommial Butler10 months ago

    Well-wrought! Especially the final stanza! I love the scent of hyacinth, so pungently sweet it bewilders the mind and intoxicates the soul.

  • Marie381Uk 10 months ago

    So beautiful ♦️♦️♦️

  • Oh my, that was so heartbreakingly sad. Loved your poem!

  • Great poetic narrative of Hyacinth's story, Sharon. Are you an Illyad and the Odyssey fan?

  • Cathy holmes11 months ago

    Oh, how lovely. Well done, MC.

  • KA Stefana 11 months ago

    Well done! Beautiful!

  • Babs Iverson11 months ago

    Oh so, melancholy and poignantly penned yet beautiful!!!

  • What a grape & epic poem, Mother! (Grape hyacinths are what we have around here.)

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