How Would I Know
about riding motorcycle and bicycle in the snow
Who rides a motorcycle in the snow
Who would think to ride a bicycle
It makes sense to ride a motorcycle
Who rides a motorcycle in the snow
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Who would think to ride a bicycle
It makes sense, but how would I know
It was a blustery day, and boy did it blow
Who would think to ride a bicycle
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It makes sense, but how would I know
anyone who rides a motorcycle or bicycle
in the snow? I haven't ridden a tricycle
It makes sense, but how would I know
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Anyone who rides a motorcycle or bicycle
in the snow, I may be a bit off
Some people will truly scoff
at anyone who rides motorcycle or bicycle
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In the snow, I may be a bit off
I love the snow, it is so refreshing
It really is such a blessing
In the snow, I may be a bit off
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Who rides motorcycle in the snow?
Who would think to ride a bicycle?
In some places a motorcycle
Who rides motorcycle in the snow
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Author's Note: Here's how to write a catena rondo - The poem is comprised of a variable number of quatrains. Each quatrain has a rhyme pattern of AbbA. The first line of each quatrain is also the final line of the quatrain. The second line of each quatrain is the first line of the next quatrain. The final quatrain should repeat the first quatrain word for word.
Mikeydred dollar prompt challenge below.
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About the Creator
Denise E Lindquist
I am married with 7 children, 28 grands, and 13 great-grandchildren. I am a culture consultant part-time. I write A Poem a Day in February for 8 years now. I wrote 4 - 50,000 word stories in NaNoWriMo. I write on Vocal/Medium daily.
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Comments (10)
Sorry I somehow missed this excellent poem
This was such a fun read. I love the playful rhythm and repetition in this form!
What a great poem and are you entering Mr. Mike's challenge. Your poem is perfect.
βοΈπ΅Your title and subtile was a treat to read, especially because they rhyme. βοΈπ²I love how playful this was. How at the start we don't know exactly what you think about whether one should ride a motorcycle or bicycle in the snow. Maybe you believe both should not be so. Which is hilarious π βοΈOh my gosh. Did YOU think to ride a bicycle in the snow? π π΅So this was a catena Rondo. I must say, the way you introduced it with your fantastic, example piece, really made it attractive to try. I don't think I would have the time for it, but it is one I will remember. π²I am still laughing, so this was absolutely fantastic. π€β€οΈπ€
I really appreciate how you use the catena rondo form to create motion that mirrors the wheels of the poemβs subject. It circles back on itself seamlessly, like tire tracks in fresh snow.
Nicely done, Denise. Your topic really suited this format.
I don't do well in cold weather so no any kinda cycling for me, lol. Loved your poem!
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Oh wow, this is fantastic!
I would say riding anything in the snow is dangerous. And I might try this poetry structure soon . Excellent poem.