How to Dance to Byron
A Pilgrimage in the In-Between

...that would be clever, I agree.
Clever indeed, old chap. Clever to the highest degree.
The problem is, though, that so often I feel so clever
Too clever, even.
Too clever for my own good.
I set off on prosaic expeditions with the best of intentions
a starting point, a jump off.
A skewed view of something banal or a mundane take on something
more than trivial
But then come the metaphors, piling on top of the irony
and the self-assured subversion I consider "artistic integrity"
Planning and preparation are the keys to a successful journey
or so we're led to believe.
I set off on prosaic expeditions from the seat of my pants, though,
does that make me ill-prepared, unplanned, and unreliable?
Probably?
~
So, I'll inhale the world's breath and exhale
the Contained Observations too (CO2) abstract to process.
Instead I wonder
if being deliberate will produce something beautiful,
or will it, as is my concern, transform my unique art
into something you might expect to see in the journal
of a 12-year-old.
~
One of my favourite bits in my favourite film about
what poetry is and what it should be
where, after reading the odious "Introduction to Poetry"
Robin Williams' character, Mr. Keating, calls the author
Mr. J Evans Pritchard, excrement.
"We're not laying pipe! We're talking about poetry."
"How can you describe poetry like American Bandstand?"
Have you ever tried to dance to Childe Harold's Pilgrimage?
~
If you've read it, you'll know what I mean—the irony won't be
lost(like this word from its line, like this line from its)
~
If you've yet to read it, you should take a few hours out and
lose yourself in the artistry and beauty of one of the true greats
I contend and act with contention to the reverie afforded the
Romantics, when I am a student of Shelley, Mary, at the very least
Choice words I have for Wordsworth, though I still marvel at a good
rhyme.
~
Childe Harold's Pilgrimage is, after all, a pilgrimage—a journey
in search of something...
after years of debauchery and slovenliness
I sucked hard on my tongue to deliver that
word
But his journey, Childe Harold's pilgrimage, is
One I can relate to, one we can all relate to
Clever,
Possibly?
~
The deliberate versus the accidental hasn't even been discussed
when planning and preparation stifle freedom
no amount of scripting, programming
can help—
who really wins?
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Thanks for reading!
Author's Notes: For reference: "Childe Harold's Pilgrimage: A Romaunt is a long narrative poem in four parts written by Lord Byron. The poem was published between 1812 and 1818. Dedicated to "Ianthe", it describes the travels and reflections of a young man disillusioned with a life of pleasure and revelry, looking for distraction in foreign lands." It's also "an expression of melancholy and disillusionment felt by a generation weary of the wars of the post-Revolutionary and Napoleonic eras."
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Comments (11)
I'm not sure I'm ready to read Child Harold in English, but I read the translation so long ago, I can't even recall it (except that I kinda liked it). Did you ever wonder what Byron would think about your poem? I think he'd be impressed.
Bravo, Paul, bravo! Scripting and planning is a fine thing indeed. But I, like you, much prefer it when the muse takes my breath away, every following moment dense with feverish scribbling. A single moment of inspiration is all I beg and damn all efforts to improve a single jot or tiddle of what comes of it. Lovely writing, Paul. You can’t go far wrong with Byron!
What a wonderful validation you've offered the rest of us who shoot from the hip! This is beautiful and insightful
Ugh yeah well…this is sublime…Byron kinda an asshat but this take on it was truly spectacular my chap
Ooooo, I haven't watched Dead Poets Society in forever!!! I just might have to now... Oh! I loved this too, the flow and relatability of it!! I'd like to think I'm a planner but then I go so far off track sometimes it's a bit of a trip! 😅
Hey Paul ! How’s things? I have not read Byron but your afterward helped me understand where you were going with this. Very interesting and curious. Have a swell day ! 😊
Stream of Consciousness, oh yeah. and the CO2 was superb!
"Contained Observations too (CO2) abstract to process" is such stellar writing. This poem really highlights how honed your craft is, honestly. I also love the idea of metaphors piling on top of irony. This is really an amazing piece, even for you!!
I feel like this poem is written by someone simply thinking out loud about their experience with Byron's piece as they contemplate its meaning. It's deep and thought provoking.
Beautifully written and very thought provoking. This is one of those pieces that I feel should be read, re-read, contemplated, and revisited. I loved this part "the Contained Observations too (CO2) abstract to process." Very clever, indeed.
First of all, I hope that you entered this in the Somewhere Between Here and There Challenge because this is an excellent mid-thought/mid-conversation poem. Second, I love the voice with which you write this poem. It just feels so appropriate for someone writing or talking about Byron. You have also created a beautiful rhythm here that pulls me through the poem but, like you pointed out about Byron’s poem, is not something I would “dance to”. You’ve just written such an amazing piece here. Well done!