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How to Dance to Byron

A Pilgrimage in the In-Between

By Paul StewartPublished 5 months ago 2 min read
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...that would be clever, I agree.

Clever indeed, old chap. Clever to the highest degree.

The problem is, though, that so often I feel so clever

Too clever, even.

Too clever for my own good.

I set off on prosaic expeditions with the best of intentions

a starting point, a jump off.

A skewed view of something banal or a mundane take on something

more than trivial

But then come the metaphors, piling on top of the irony

and the self-assured subversion I consider "artistic integrity"

Planning and preparation are the keys to a successful journey

or so we're led to believe.

I set off on prosaic expeditions from the seat of my pants, though,

does that make me ill-prepared, unplanned, and unreliable?

Probably?

~

So, I'll inhale the world's breath and exhale

the Contained Observations too (CO2) abstract to process.

Instead I wonder

if being deliberate will produce something beautiful,

or will it, as is my concern, transform my unique art

into something you might expect to see in the journal

of a 12-year-old.

~

One of my favourite bits in my favourite film about

what poetry is and what it should be

where, after reading the odious "Introduction to Poetry"

Robin Williams' character, Mr. Keating, calls the author

Mr. J Evans Pritchard, excrement.

"We're not laying pipe! We're talking about poetry."

"How can you describe poetry like American Bandstand?"

Have you ever tried to dance to Childe Harold's Pilgrimage?

~

If you've read it, you'll know what I mean—the irony won't be

lost(like this word from its line, like this line from its)

~

If you've yet to read it, you should take a few hours out and

lose yourself in the artistry and beauty of one of the true greats

I contend and act with contention to the reverie afforded the

Romantics, when I am a student of Shelley, Mary, at the very least

Choice words I have for Wordsworth, though I still marvel at a good

rhyme.

~

Childe Harold's Pilgrimage is, after all, a pilgrimage—a journey

in search of something...

after years of debauchery and slovenliness

I sucked hard on my tongue to deliver that

word

But his journey, Childe Harold's pilgrimage, is

One I can relate to, one we can all relate to

Clever,

Possibly?

~

The deliberate versus the accidental hasn't even been discussed

when planning and preparation stifle freedom

no amount of scripting, programming

can help—

who really wins?

*

Thanks for reading!

Author's Notes: For reference: "Childe Harold's Pilgrimage: A Romaunt is a long narrative poem in four parts written by Lord Byron. The poem was published between 1812 and 1818. Dedicated to "Ianthe", it describes the travels and reflections of a young man disillusioned with a life of pleasure and revelry, looking for distraction in foreign lands." It's also "an expression of melancholy and disillusionment felt by a generation weary of the wars of the post-Revolutionary and Napoleonic eras."

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  • Imola Tóth4 months ago

    I'm not sure I'm ready to read Child Harold in English, but I read the translation so long ago, I can't even recall it (except that I kinda liked it). Did you ever wonder what Byron would think about your poem? I think he'd be impressed.

  • John Cox5 months ago

    Bravo, Paul, bravo! Scripting and planning is a fine thing indeed. But I, like you, much prefer it when the muse takes my breath away, every following moment dense with feverish scribbling. A single moment of inspiration is all I beg and damn all efforts to improve a single jot or tiddle of what comes of it. Lovely writing, Paul. You can’t go far wrong with Byron!

  • Aspen Marie 5 months ago

    What a wonderful validation you've offered the rest of us who shoot from the hip! This is beautiful and insightful

  • Matthew J. Fromm5 months ago

    Ugh yeah well…this is sublime…Byron kinda an asshat but this take on it was truly spectacular my chap

  • Test5 months ago

    Ooooo, I haven't watched Dead Poets Society in forever!!! I just might have to now... Oh! I loved this too, the flow and relatability of it!! I'd like to think I'm a planner but then I go so far off track sometimes it's a bit of a trip! 😅

  • Grz Colm5 months ago

    Hey Paul ! How’s things? I have not read Byron but your afterward helped me understand where you were going with this. Very interesting and curious. Have a swell day ! 😊

  • Andrea Corwin 5 months ago

    Stream of Consciousness, oh yeah. and the CO2 was superb!

  • Silver Daux5 months ago

    "Contained Observations too (CO2) abstract to process" is such stellar writing. This poem really highlights how honed your craft is, honestly. I also love the idea of metaphors piling on top of irony. This is really an amazing piece, even for you!!

  • Krysha Thayer5 months ago

    I feel like this poem is written by someone simply thinking out loud about their experience with Byron's piece as they contemplate its meaning. It's deep and thought provoking.

  • A. J. Schoenfeld5 months ago

    Beautifully written and very thought provoking. This is one of those pieces that I feel should be read, re-read, contemplated, and revisited. I loved this part "the Contained Observations too (CO2) abstract to process." Very clever, indeed.

  • Stephanie Hoogstad5 months ago

    First of all, I hope that you entered this in the Somewhere Between Here and There Challenge because this is an excellent mid-thought/mid-conversation poem. Second, I love the voice with which you write this poem. It just feels so appropriate for someone writing or talking about Byron. You have also created a beautiful rhythm here that pulls me through the poem but, like you pointed out about Byron’s poem, is not something I would “dance to”. You’ve just written such an amazing piece here. Well done!

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