Beauty in the strangest of places
Velvet painted roses
Strawberries and cream
Itching for something sweet
Like honey rolling off the tongue
Sickly sweet words
Tell me with haste
All your deceptions in one place
For me to absorb
Pretty little lies
Even more beautiful than twilight nights
Twisting tall tales
Siren to my shore
I eagerly await your hypnotic melodies
Take me to the undercurrent of song
Break me out
Lead me on
About the Creator
Tressa Rose
On a serious self-discovering, soul-searching journey. Breaking myself out of a stagnant shell and reaching out for my dream of being a writer.
Co-author of Bounce Back- Dreams to Reality: Faith Over Fear
https://a.co/d/98H2vCF
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I can finally see the light Even in the dark Through the crack under the door Lying under my blankets, And I've been hiding here Feeling like a failure at life Unsure of my next move Listening to the devil on my shoulder. It gets a little overwhelming And my mental health gets the better of me Ending up feeling like it's a fight for my life Drowning in my self-doubts I'm ready to quit I think I've had enough.
By Tressa Rose2 years ago in Poets
Comments (7)
This is how I used to feel my ex narc... I shudder with this poem, it brings chills to my spine. I relate to this alot. well done.
Oooo, I second what Rob said below! It flows so smoothly like honey both ways! Loved it!
A beautiful poem that flows like honey in either direction! Great work, Tressa Rose.
Simply lovely. Great job.
Beautiful poem! 💓
Another great poem
beautiful!