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Hippopotamus

not a rhinoceros

By BrenPublished 2 years ago 1 min read

and what have i got

a hippopotamus of faith

a barrel full

of peeled laughter

and what do i want?

a large tank,

a larger heart

and a thicker skin

i dunno’

if i knew

i wouldn’t ponder

if i knew

i wouldn’t ask

if i knew

yet still

i’d wonder

if i knew

i’d wear the mask

and what is there

i have yet to get

nothing is certain

nothing is set

i'll know it

when i see it

but

i don’t see it yet

how will i know

how will i forget

and what have i got

a box of crocodile tears

a barrel full

of breezy teethed screams

and what do i want?

a never smile

look on my dial

no cya later

i’m the ‘in a while

i dunno’

if i knew

i’d wish i didn’t

if i knew

i mighta lied

if i knew

and i couldn’t

if i knew

maybe then

i woulda tried

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    Ah the crocodile tears. Some people seem to have a generous amount of it. Loved your poem!

  • a hippopotamus of faith...yep, and thicker skin. Spot on

  • I enjoyed your story

  • Gina C.2 years ago

    Thoughtful as ever, Brenton! I always enjoy your pieces ❤️

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