Him and Her: A Love Left Unsaid!
"Them" in a parallel universe, where their hearts are entwined, but their souls are clueless...
HER & HIM
"Does he even remember me at all?"
I never ever forgot her, no matter summer, winter, or fall
"I just wish to see him again!"
I'm waiting for her, still in that lane
"Does he even know I exist?"
Her memories in my head, my heart in her fist!
"He'll never know his place in my heart"
How do I tell her, she's my world, my end, and my start?
"I cry for him- Why is my love unseen?"
I love her infinitely- Will she be my Queen?
"I wish he LOVES me the same"
I love her more- But does she know my name?
About the Creator
Maryam Batool
I'm 17
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
Ready to let my writing bloom!
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Keep reading
More stories from Maryam Batool and writers in Poets and other communities.
Comments (6)
That ending? Chef’s kiss—“I love her more—but does she know my name?” Brutal and beautiful at the same time! 💖
Sometimes you'll never know if you don't say anything
This is the deep love This kind of love is too strong very good Bravo Batool
Maryammmmmm!!!! I LOVED this so much. The unspoken confession, the quiet ache of thinking you're invisible while someone is secretly loving you… you captured it all so delicately. The way you wrote both their POVs the longing, the silence, the hidden affection,it’s so beautiful it hurts. Truly stunning<3
Another wonderful poem! "I never ever forgot her, no matter summer, winter, or fall" Beautiful line✨
Ahhhh!! You both love each other. Pleaseeee confess your feelings. Then you both could be sooo happy! 😍😍😍😍😍😍 Loved your poem sooo much! Also, I've replied to your comment on Annie Kapur's piece. Just letting you know here in case you don't get the notification. Because sometimes, when I reply to someone's comment, I don't get a notification when they've replied me 😅😅