Hide-n-Seek
How to Disappear Like an '80s Child
<<One>>
The little dead-end street rang loud
‘Neath the glaring summer sun
All day the wind carried laughter
Squealing children having fun
<<Two>>
And then the glowing orb sank low
Kissed the rocky peaks goodnight
A blanket of dark draped o’er all
Highlighted by soft starlight
<<Three>>
Giggles faded to faint whispers
Pavement rang with slapping feet
Running in ev’ry direction
Scattered dandelion seed
<<Four>>
One snuck into the neighbor's yard
Crouched behind a fence of wood
Amid the overgrown shrubbery
Holding her breath best she could
<<Five>>
One climbed 'mid branches high above
The dark, empty weed-filled lot
Perched amongst the twigs and the leaves
Determined not to get caught
<<Six>>
He ran and ran as fast he could
All the way to the far end
Dressed all in black from head to toe
Tonight darkness was his friend
<<Seven>>
Two stayed together hand-in-hand
Into rows of cornstalks tall
Huddled into the rich, soft earth
Became silent, still, and small
<<Eight>>
She raced across the street so quick
Slipped behind the run down shed
Sank back deep into the shadows
Mimicked quiet of the dead
<<Nine>>
He circled round into the back
Beneath the deck he did crawl
Amongst the spiders and the bugs
His spot secret from them all
<<Ten>>
One left alone where it began
His face hid against the bark
He called out loud for all to hear
As they sheltered in the dark
<<Eleven>>
He counted up as was the rule
Surely did not dare to peek
Called his warning for all to hear
Quietly began to seek
<<Twelve>>
Now off to catch his hidden prey
A ghost of stealth he must be
He'd only tag them ‘fore they're safe
With invisibility
<<Thirteen>>
Seven pairs of little round eyes
Watched and waited, held their breath
Knowing the window was so small
Failure would mean sudden death
<<Fourteen>>
One brave soul snuck out from his spot
Stayed where darkest shadows fell
Checked for movement before he ran
Reaching home with whooping yell
<<Fifteen>>
Emboldened by the shout of joy
Others began creeping near
Three more made it back to the porch
Erupting victory cheer
<<Sixteen>>
She waited for the prowl to pass
And dropped from the tree with grace
A snapping twig gave her away
Thus began the final chase
<<Seventeen>>
He spun 'round fast and gave pursuit
She was far ahead of him
He closed the gap, reached out his hand
She leapt to the porch to win
<<Eighteen>>
Sadly, his hand made contact first
‘Fore her foot on pavement hit
His laughter rang through the night air
“I got you first, now you're it”
<<Nineteen>>
Eight children gathered at the porch
Round two now about to start
Remaining there one starts to count
Others fade into the dark
<<Twenty>>
I hope this tale has helped you learn
And you are prepared to run
Have you vanished into the night?
"Ready or not, here I come!"
About the Creator
A. J. Schoenfeld
I only write about the real world. But if you look close enough, you'll see there's magic hiding in plain sight everywhere.
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Comments (5)
Very clever poem-- brought back fin memories
That was the 'Hide and Seek' of my days. I remember doing these things when I didn't want to go indoors with my mum. I love how the game plays out in your poem I can hear the children's thoughts as I read it. Brilliant stuff!
I remember playing games like this in the farm where I grew up with kids that came with their trailers to stay on the land. Great nights of hiding and seeking!
I'm a 90s kid but my childhood was like this too. This felt so nostalgic. Loved your poem!
As an 80s child, I loved this! So fun 😁