Stars, burning guideposts
Map of Dreams. Hard to follow
Drowned in city lights
About the Creator
Sean A.
A happy guy that tends to write a little cynically. Just my way of dealing with the world outside my joyous little bubble.
If You Love Me, You'll Do It
I met Jason when I was five years old. I could say that I loved him from the moment I saw him. He was so handsome to me and I felt in awe by his presence. When they introduced him as the new kid in school, I wanted to be his friend right away. I remember it like it was yesterday. I remember his smile and how he didn't seem shy. He appeared confident and ready to learn. I waved at him and said "hello," before anyone else could even say a word. He sat next to me, and I asked him if he wanted to be friends. He looked so happy as he said, "Yes!"
By Sidney Smith (Sid Smith)7 days ago in Fiction
Comments (4)
Excellent take on the Sky-ku challenge! City lights sure do drown out the star light.
lovely and amazing
Each line in this was so visually rich! Really great entry, Shaun!
An indictment of metropolitan light pollution folded into a haiku? Marvelous!