https://www.lovingly.com/flower-meanings/hibiscus
One look, and desire befell us
One touch, and gravity took us
We tasted sweet hibiscus
’Til promises rusted
We risked what we lost
Hearts once trusted
That one look
Now haunts
Us
About the Creator
Claire
If writing is my hobby, then drinking coffee is my vocation. That's the dream anyway.
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Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
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Excellent piece ,what the eyes sees is what the heart holds