HER
her heart - hopes,
her heart - hesitates,
her heart - hides her heartfelt hurt,
her heart - hides her haunting hunger
her heart - hopes, he, her hero, holds her honorably
her heart - hypnotically holds his heart highly honored
her heart - hopes he, her hero, hasn't had heartfelt hesitations
her heart - hopes he hasn’t hastily halted his humility
her heart - holds his happiness, holding her hand
her heart - hopes his heart heeds hers
Her heart - heals his hurts
Her heart - heals hers
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
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Outstanding
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Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives



Comments (7)
Beautifully written. Well done.
Wow. Masterful style. Love the flow Kelli. Who would have that a Tautogram could show such emotion. But you did it. ❤️
I love that you wrote this tautogram as a Diamante style--& carried it through 12 lines! Impressive! Beautiful words & well written.
Wow! AMAZING poem, and I love how you combined the tautogram and the diamond style!! 😍😍
I must admit Kelli... This is one of your best...!!! Excellent job as always!!! 🙂
A wonderful read. Well done, Kelli!
I loved the format of this, and it flowed so smoothly. What beautiful sentiments :) Well done!!