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It felt so real

By Jessica Moncada Published 3 years ago 1 min read

I don’t know why she did it or why I even stayed,

All I remember was lying there naked body on display,

With a scalpel in her hands I watched her take a breath,

She cut into my stomach and I watched the flesh rip,

Next thing I know I was wandering in the streets,

I could feel the open wound I could feel my stomach bleed,

I ran to a friends house and collapsed on the floor,

I didn’t say a word but it was a sight she couldn’t ignore,

I could feel my pulse slowing as we entered the emergency room,

I saw my open wound and knew I was dying it was the only thing I could only assume,

I tried to voice anything I tried but nothing again,

Blood trickled down my legs and I just knew it was the end,

No one would listen not one person cared,

Till a woman came out and saw my despair,

She rushed me through the doors and all I saw was bright lights,

It was then I woke up clutching my stomach and filled with so much fright.

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Jessica Moncada

Just a small time writer from California who has never had the courage to take the chance and start putting my material out there.

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