These tears come in heavy waves
I lost your love
The only thing to keep me sane
I lost your love,
and as predicted...heavy rain
These tears come in heavy waves
My heart has sunk,
but it's hard to explain
You'll always have my love
Though right now you're in a different place
Always us
A promise I could never evade
These tears come in heavy waves
Always us
A promise I was happy to of made
These tears come in heavy waves
Always love
No matter how much time appears to have slipped away
ALWAYS LOVE
No matter how much time appears to have slipped away
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Frankie Martinelli
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Excellent poem. I love how you relate broken heart to heavy waves
So sad and you describe your emotion so well.
Powerful and beautiful.
So sad and powerful. I loved your imagery here of the power of your loss being as strong as nature.