"Heaven"
A View of Heaven for the Sensational ll Challenge
By Pamela Walsh-HoltePublished about a year ago • 1 min read
If I could view heaven what would I see?
Would the angels song bring music to my ears?
Would the scent of the saved replace my fears?
Would the hem of his garment be at my finger tips?
Would the taste of forgiveness be on my lips?
About the Creator
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brilliant
Beautiful. Good job making it rhyme!
stirring and beautifully penned, Pamela!