You
are warmest places
my body has ever known
Strong yet gentle hands on a sizzling secluded cove in Bahia
Midsummer sweat-togethers next to complimentary coladas
Lava stones on back
Seared-proximity above lips
Fire-breath surrounding soul
Now permanent transcontinental relocation for tropical latitudes
to access forever-summer-you
to hold
Me
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Love it! Love the execution so it breaks down to that final "me". Makes me long for a similar vacation too, it being a cold Valentine's Day with snow on the ground. 🔥🔥 🔥 ⚡💙⚡
Turn up the heat!!! Love the energy your poem gives off. 🤩
Gurl this was steamy, luxurious and fabulous! I loved it with my whole heart! Go Dani! 💕💖💝
Heat makes me feel woozy, delirious, & slightly anxious. Sometimes that's a good thing--as I sense you have expressed in your words above.
This is so great! You've captured heat (and passion) perfectly. And now I miss summer!
Oooof, this truly makes your body sizzle and tingle. Hot!
Another day on a hot island paradise with your love!! forever-summer - I loved that!!
Now that's paradise right there! Loved this so much!
This is pure heat—sensual, intimate, and beautifully evocative. It’s like feeling the sun on your skin through poetry. Love the way warmth is woven into every line! 💖
Loved it, SSS!!!❤️❤️💕
Sizzling!
Well done!
I hope that this You and Me meet 💗 Wonderful words