Heartbreak At Dawn:(
Read on, if you dare, to see the ache and the love I still bear
Who will unveil the heart of a quiet soul? True emotions seem destined to remain untold. Pain doesn’t fade; it’s a lifelong guide, teaching us to live with the wounds inside. This may be a twisted truth or a lie, but I can’t erase her from my mind. Deep in my heart, her memory still burns a yearning that forever returns.
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In your absence, echoes fill my heart,
Before sunrise, I can't depart.
Faith in lamps, a wolf disguised,
Don’t forget me, I beg.
Still, I stood to see,
Loyalty's lost,
Parting's pain,
Betray—
Why?
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This nonet was written by my 13-year-old daughter, and I am so proud of her. Your reading, and heartfelt response will give her a boost of energy to write more and polish her creative skills. Thanks!
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Ameer Bibi
I am a mother of three. My life is full of stories and I love to read human stories.
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Wow. very well written.
Wow. That’s amazing!!
Very well structured Nonet, beautifully written by your daughter, she has tremendous potential to excel in the field of writing. Wish you very good luck.
Whoa, is this ever relatable! Methinks Vocal may need to offer supplementary counselling after some of these challenges. I enjoyed reading and feeling your feelings Ameer. Continued healing for us all!
Damn, so heartbreaking
Unfortunately, this things happen a lot in relationships. It's just so sad 🥺
It’s really sad and heartbreaking ❤️🩹
Loyalty's lost, everything lost!
Your poem broke my heart too. It's painful to see some one going we love . Stay strong and hope for the best.
So beautifully written and from the heart! I wonder who the person who betrayed you/her was. But maybe it’s friendship love? I hope writing about it will help the healing 😌💕
Very nice Well written Keep writing and Keep rocking