Blind Trust Takes Your Sight
The pain of deception and betrayal is like the taste of death
By Ameer BibiPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
Photo by Fabien Maurin on Unsplash
Blind trust in love, fragile silk it tears,
Mother's heart, each falsehood embraced,
His words, sharp thorns that pierce deep,
Son's fever, his absence,
Heartaches, fears unfold,
Phone checked, truth feared,
Fraud laughed,
Trust slain,
Hurt.
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Ameer Bibi
I am a mother of three. My life is full of stories and I love to read human stories.
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Comments (5)
This is so heart-ripping! You've really zoned in on the emotions though and you need a gold star for that as it's not easy.
This was truly very devastating! I hope this didn't happen to you 🥺
It’s really sad and heartbreaking. 😭
Heartbreaking
An amazing response to teh challeng, excellent work