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Blind Trust Takes Your Sight

The pain of deception and betrayal is like the taste of death

By Ameer BibiPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Blind Trust Takes Your Sight
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Blind trust in love, fragile silk it tears,

Mother's heart, each falsehood embraced,

His words, sharp thorns that pierce deep,

Son's fever, his absence,

Heartaches, fears unfold,

Phone checked, truth feared,

Fraud laughed,

Trust slain,

Hurt.

heartbreaksad poetry

About the Creator

Ameer Bibi

I am a mother of three. My life is full of stories and I love to read human stories.

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  • The Dani Writerabout a year ago

    This is so heart-ripping! You've really zoned in on the emotions though and you need a gold star for that as it's not easy.

  • This was truly very devastating! I hope this didn't happen to you 🥺

  • Xie Lian :Dabout a year ago

    It’s really sad and heartbreaking. 😭

  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Heartbreaking

  • An amazing response to teh challeng, excellent work

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