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Heart of Black

A raven's heart of black

By Deasun T. SmythPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Heart of Black
Photo by Valentin Petkov on Unsplash

The raven with his heart of black

Vying to steal a tasty snack.

He arched above in tandem flight

Looking to land, left or right.

Till at last he landed near

Growing braver, not knowing fear.

For on the window sat a pie

With whips of steam rising to the sky.

Hopping closer, ’nothing to see’

Eaten, the pie was soon to be.

‘Oh’ thought the raven, the aroma was bliss

This sure was a treat he didn’t want to miss.

‘I have to have it’, he thought with an icy stare

For the pie was just lying there.

But as he tries to take a bite —

Something gave him a terrible fright.

He flew to the nearest tree in a bolt-line

Because someone else chose to dine.

The neighbour’s dog took the pie

(For the dog was a really selfish guy).

The dog munched, gobbled, and gnawed

‘Unfair, unfair’ the raven cawed.

He rest his beak, with a teary-eyed sigh

Realizing he wouldn’t get any pie.

humor

About the Creator

Deasun T. Smyth

Eighteen years ago… I was born into the wind-swept lands of the prairies – where I regularly fly on dragons and battle goblin kings.

I'm a First Nation's wannabe writer, trying to survive college...

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  • T. Licht2 years ago

    great poem. so carefree and light

  • Lamar Wiggins3 years ago

    Great flow which helped the visuals come alive. I loved it!

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Delightful poem humorously written. Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Nice work❤️💯😉

  • Mariann Carroll3 years ago

    I can see this in a children picture book, excellent poetry . I enjoy the read. I never thought I will say this, poor Raven.

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