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Hear the Whispers in the Wind

Can you hear it ? Can you?

By Marie381Uk Published 10 months ago Updated 10 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - April 2025
By George’s Girl 2025

Hear the Whispers in the Wind

Hear the whispers in the wind

they still say your name.

Not like a prayer. Like a wound.

We were never gentle. not even once.

You loved like fire, I answered with ash.

The walls remember us.

Cracks where we leaned too close,

The doors that slammed,

on things we never said.

I walk the path we burned

it never healed.

Your breath is in the trees.

Mine stays silent.

the wind…the wind remembers

It remembers everything.

It wasn’t fate. It was a curse

we wrote in skin, signed in silence.

You said forever like a dare.

I kissed you like I wanted to vanish.

Now the night feels like you

not warm, but waiting.

Sometimes, when the air shifts,

I turn around too fast

still expecting your shadow.

And when I dream,you come back,

same eyes, but colder. Same hands,

but they pass right through.

You never left, not really.

You’re stitched between each breath

and the ones I choke on.

They say time buries all things,

they never loved a ghost with a heartbeat.

So let the wind keep whispering.

Let it carry what’s left of us.

I won’t answer, However I will listen.

Hear the whispers of the wind of us two.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Narghiza Ergashova7 months ago

    "Nicely explained!"

  • Henry Lucy9 months ago

    Great job dear congratulations to your hard works ,I tap from your grace 💪💕👏🏼

  • Yes! You did it Marie!! 🎉 Congrats on getting Top Story!!! 🥳 Well deserved and super proud of you! 🙌✨👏

  • Arshad Ali10 months ago

    Awesome to read

  • Jason Ray Morton 10 months ago

    Absolute masterpiece. And the image you chose is stunning.

  • Antoni De'Leon10 months ago

    This is absolutely beautiful, and the cover pic is breathtaking. I love how you capture the emotions. Congrats.

  • T. Licht10 months ago

    some poems leave me speechless, this one is one of them. You start off with such powerful lines and don't stop them until the very end. Congrats on TS!!

  • Peace Oputa10 months ago

    Congratulations on Top story

  • Mr. D 10 months ago

    :)

  • Very good work Marie, congrats 😊👏

  • Test10 months ago

    ❤️

  • JBaz10 months ago

    Nice

  • Mark Graham10 months ago

    We all need to learn to listen more one way or another.

  • Margaret Brennan10 months ago

    this is incredibly beautiful. Sad, and yet with a twinge of hope. I LOVE it.

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