He painted a portrait with His words!
He spoke and it was!
Existence - Bang! And there it was!
Why must we make it so complicated to understand?
Any other version or story is far too bland.
He cares and watches like a Shepherd.
His masterpiece is all around.
It’s in the eyes of a baby.
It’s in the birds in a nest.
It’s in the galaxies far and wide.
It’s in the sound of symphonies.
It’s in the rhythm of the waves.
It’s in the acts of kindness from human to human.
It’s in the heartbeats and breath of every living creature.
About the Creator
Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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Heartfelt and relatable
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Comments (3)
Love how vivid and alive this is! ✨
So true and spot on! Shame is it will only let me give it one heart! 💖💖💖💖💖
What a hearty heartfelt poem painted with great words! Truly a great breath of a great poem!