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Hazy

lazy crazy

By BrenPublished 12 months ago 1 min read

can’t see anything ahead

caught in the way behind

trying get out in front

trying to make out the signs

the lights are growing dim

i might only have one more shot

not sure if it’s hazy

and that all of this is my lot

got no depth perception

got no peripheral vision

everything i cannot see

the root of indecision

the lights are growing dim

and i have no idea what's what

not sure if it’s hazy

or there's something i forgot

tunneled visions narrow and taper

nothing follows close behind

going on pure gut feeling alone

running straight but blind

the lights are growing dim

and i’m not sure if i care or not

not sure if it’s hazy

or which feelings smell of rot

can’t see anything at all

light hides amid this murky mire

i see my heartbeat in my ears

and smell the rotting feeling fire

the lights are growing dim

my powders wet, i’m outa shot

not sure if it’s hazy

or if i'm just losing the plot

For Fun

About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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  • T. Licht12 months ago

    great style!!!

  • Grz Colm12 months ago

    Sounds a little like my brain Brenton. 👍 Love your style as always!

  • Heather Hubler12 months ago

    Your song writing skills are shining in this one!! Loved it to bits!!!

  • My plot has been missing for years.

  • Paul Stewart12 months ago

    this wild ride felt way too relatable! great dizzying piece, pal!

  • Marie381Uk 12 months ago

    Fabulous ☘️☘️☘️☘️☘️☘️☘️

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