Haunting of Car 17 - The Storm
Part Four - Collaboration with Kelliđč

Part One by Kelli:
Part Two by me:
Part Three by Kelli:
An electrical storm came late one October night
Filling the chilled air around with a static charge
And blocking the Hunterâs moonâs reflected light
Emitting an eerie, supernatural virulent discharge
Glowing unnaturally, silencing the frightened wildlife
A low vibration begins, accompanied by steady pulsing
An unearthly screech ridden with paranormal strife
The Wraiths lure souls while they demonically sing
Calling to them all who are lost, that they may be prey
The conductor stands watch, always ready to be a guide
To any casualty who has forgotten how to kneel and pray
An army of ghouls, comprised of criminals who died
Waiting for the conductor to pass along the bossâs orders
Satanâs engineer, who led them all to this spectral hell
The crashed train, an eldritch portal to Abaddonâs borders
The only warning, the ghostly sound of the tolling bell
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Part Five by Kelli:
About the Creator
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insight
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters



Comments (8)
Ask not for whom the bell tolls..., ...no need for you to worry, it tolls for me.
I agree please continue this âŠïžđâŠïž
More electricity!!!! âĄâĄâĄâĄ âĄđđ
Man, I sure have my work cut out for me! Great work đ„°
Also, how cool this is a collaboration. I only did this once, not here, it was fun. You and Kelly perhaps would like to participate in that project. Itâs a book. Each chapter written by a different author. Iâll post the details in the Writers community this weekend. đ·
Yes! It needs to be continued! And I must read the previous parts. I love your art. đ
Oh it sure needs to be continued. I gotta know what happens next!
I read Kelli's yesterday and commented that The Haunting here reminds me of Stephen King's Carrie! Cool, gals!