
Rain came down
we bathed in it
the sprinkles of
newness upon
her face painted
her with beauty
and grace.
We shared the wetness
like a soft kiss and
every drop hit just
right, leaving us in bliss.
It rained and we
celebrated each other
and all the rainbows
that followed us as
we let happiness
swallow us.
Until one day
it started raining
harder like stings
from a bee we felt our love
falter, noticing
the pleasure we'd shared
had diminished as
the crushing rain showed
signs we were finished
The ground we had stood on was
so wet it had eroded
our chats were less
barely enough to be noted
where all that was left was a
slapping of the ground like
tires on a freeway
nothing happened anymore
that made me truly happy
my days became a bore.
Rain can turn hard and be
unforgiving to the earth and ground
loss can occur where a change of mass
is all that can be found.
Soon those tires slapping
are all that is left of our trust
the rain turns to mud
that when dried turns to
dust.
In which
then
came the
erosion of us.
About the Creator
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Sam Harty is a poet of raw truth and quiet rebellion. Author of Lost Love Volumes I & II and The Lost Little Series, her work confronts heartbreak, trauma, and survival with fierce honesty and lyrical depth. Where to find me




Comments (3)
It's a great extended metaphor, Sam. It's how relationships diminish for sure.
Fabulous work!
lovely, Sam