
Heartbeats press as one
Embodiment of happy
Alone together
About the Creator
Amos Glade
Welcome to Pteetneet City & my World of Weird. Here you'll find stories of the bizarre, horror, & magic realism as well as a steaming pile of poetry. Thank you for reading.
For more madness check out my website: https://www.amosglade.com/
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Comments (6)
There's something beautifully simple yet profound in this piece. I love how it leaves room for interpretation! ✨
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Who knew a haiku could be so emotional and powerful? 😢 Nicely written, Amos.
Fantastic!
Beautiful ♦️♦️♦️
Ouuu "alone together" really intrigues me. but damn its a haiku xD i need more!