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Hang On Tight

Nothing lasts forever

By Colleen Millsteed Published 2 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - March 2024
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There are days that the sun doesn’t shine in his world,

Days when he lives in a whole world of pain,

Waking from his slumber in a dark cloud of doubt,

Dread sinking into the pit of his stomach again and again.

**

It took its toll over the years; but,

He slowly began to realise the dark days do not stay,

There were days the sun would peak shyly over the horizon,

Then disappear again; today’s not the day.

**

That tiny glimpse, that shy smile,

Was enough to land hope around his fear,

To steer his dread into a glimpse of alternate possibilities,

A tissue of sorts to dry his tear.

**

He realised that within the darkness was a tiny ledge,

And there he held on tight by his very fingernails,

Patience tested him from the depths of his dread,

Allowing him another day to live his tales.

**

He found that the darkness was not eternal,

And understood it was the time to lay low,

He’d live in the moment picturing a better future,

But boy, that darkness dissipation was slow.

**

Until —

Unexpectedly the sun shone in all her glory,

Lighting his world with dreams and desires,

Propelling him towards his happy ever after story.

**

His lesson well learned,

Nothing last forever, remember that well,

Not the darkness, not the rain, nor the sunshine or summer days,

So he chooses the moments in which to let his memories dwell.

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About the Creator

Colleen Millsteed

My first love is poetry — it’s like a desperate need to write, to free up space in my mind, to escape the constant noise in my head. Most of the time the poems write themselves — I’m just the conduit holding the metaphorical pen.

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  • Anna 2 years ago

    Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳

  • Josh Morgan2 years ago

    I resonate a lot with this! ❤️

  • Colleen, your poetry masterfully conveys the spirit of optimism and the transforming ability to persevere in the face of adversity. It serves as a comforting reminder that better times are always to come.

  • Hi Colleen! Congrats on top story :) Beautiful and deep poem.

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  • Nanash2 years ago

    Amazing

  • Congratulations on ANOTHER top story! I always told you you're an amazing writer! 😃

  • Test2 years ago

    This was so relatable and breath taking Colleen!! Beautiful job here!!

  • Andrea Corwin 2 years ago

    Congrats! Sad, but thankfully, and well said in your poem, nothing lasts forever.

  • A. J. Schoenfeld2 years ago

    Favorite line: "That tiny glimpse, that shy smile, Was enough to land hope around his fear," Beautifully written and poignant.

  • Bren2 years ago

    He could have been me and then you made me smile! Beautiful piece Colleen (a well deserved Top Story) and just the boost I needed - thank you!

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    This is wonderful. Congrats on the Ts.

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    Love the perseverance here.

  • angela hepworth2 years ago

    the beauty of the darkness is exemplified so concisely through your words - awesome work here!!

  • LilyTigerlily2 years ago

    should see it

  • Michael Himko 2 years ago

    Hello. So as I was reading this, it was as if I was actually reading my own life story. Seems odd but others do actually have some of the same kinds of experiences as well. Thank you for sharing this with the World 🌎

  • Gabriel Huizenga2 years ago

    Powerful, real, and ultimately hopeful- a great reminder that the darkness is a passing thing 💙

  • Silver Daux2 years ago

    What a beautiful poem! So much hope in this. Loved it! Congrats on the Top Story!

  • Heather Hubler2 years ago

    Back to say congrats on TS!!

  • Nothing lasts forever. Once we realise and accept that, we would know how to live a happy life. Loved your poem!

  • Linda Rivenbark2 years ago

    This one is a real humdinger! I haven't used that word in a long time. I got the gist of it the first time, but since I am dealing with a lot of the lack of light right now, my mind needed a repeat read. By the third time around, I decided that the last line is the clincher...chose where to let your memories dwell!

  • Heather Hubler2 years ago

    'But boy, that darkness dissipation was slow.' Isn't that the truth?? Nicely written and full of emotion :)

  • A well written poem! At least there’s memories!

  • Mariann Carroll2 years ago

    So, true. Nothing last forever

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