i made a bird for you
hand crafted
out of clay
to hold my greatest fears
you had always treated them
like feathers
fragile and precious
passed down by
those things you
protected me from
when i was so very young
ceramic and cracked
you pieced them together
with
glue
and
tape
you knew would peel
as soon as
my heart got so cold
you picked me up
porcelain
and practiced
knowing it was all
so very conditional
now i know
what it is to have
unconditional
i was fine china
until i was too sharp
to hold
complicated
and queer
so odd
you pretended
not to know me
the last time we met
so i built you a bird
left the mermaid
on my bathroom wall
put a period on the sentence
i'd let be a question mark
for so
very long
-r🩵
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Day 4 of Quitting
If this is how sobriety feels, maybe it’s better to go through life a little buzzed… this, along with other hits like, I want to kill myself, I wish I was dead, and I’m going to throw myself off a bridge have been the only thoughts on rotation these past few days. I promise myself that if, in a month, I still feel like this (‘this’ meaning despondent, full of rage, and simultaneously numb) I can go back to smoking. Until mid-February though? Nicotine is off the table.
By sleepy drafts5 days ago in Longevity
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Oh my. That is heartwrenching. "Conditional" ugh. 🤗
Gosh this was so poignant and emotional. Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️
Amazing
Love this, River. Great flow However, I don't like to read heartbreak poems from one of my two favorite people. :(Since I KNOW you two are so in love <3 LYLAS
I literally just gasped out loud in my desk chair. CHILLS. Ugh, that last stanza and that last line, "put a period on the sentence / i'd let be a question mark / for so / very long" - hit so, so deep. Damn. This is beautiful, heart-wrenching, and empowering all at once. Bra-freaking-vo. <3
This was so sad...and weighty, but so spot-on as to what heartbreak can be like, as Michelle said. As sad as it is, it's stunning and a great reminder of why it's good to have you back on Vocal, River, you and the Celia! :) Well done, and like Grz said, the format and flow were on point!
I’m a bit slow these days but vastly enjoyed your poem - I had to give it a second read through to fully comprehend the weight of the ending. It has a terrific flow River and I like this style as it’s (to me) more emphatic. 💚
This illustrates heartbreak so well. The change between love and that can be sudden!