Scorched, your cheeks glow red
Sun-seared while we slept - except
Where my hand had been
©October 21, 20203, Dana O. Crandell. All rights reserved.
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Dana Crandell
Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.
Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist
My poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity
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Comments (67)
Trying to go through the poetry and learn about the different types, there are so many. Vocal is a unique learning experience. Senryu -another type to learn. Congratulations on first place.
Belated congratulations! Doing my best to back track through what I missed. Very well done.
Masterpiece! ✨💥💫
Very clever, Dana. And scary! An excellent first place piece!
Congratulations!
Enchanted!
Congratulations! Nice work!
Congratulations!
Congratulations! What a way to wake up- that image.
This is just perfect, Dana! Congrats on your win!
Amazing!!! Another first-place badge. It has to feel great! Congrats on a well-deserved win, Dana. So happy for ya!
Congratulations Dana! ❤️
Fantastic buddy and many congratulations 👍👍🎉🎉
Congratulations Dana! Wowed by your achievement!
Woooop wooop, sir! Another fine entry, another fine win. Well done for this beautiful and touching piece that has just enough humour in it to stop it from being too queasy! Love this and congrats on first place! You've had an awesome year of placements this year! It's been awesome to be watching it!
Congratulations on 1st place, Dana! Well done. 🥇🏆
Congratulations 🎉 on your success and win 🥇very delicate and unique piece
Congratulations, Dana!!!! This one was a fav for sure 😁😁
Congratulations!.I can see why this won. Really cheeky and unerstatedly sincere. 😁
Her hee! Brilliant and cheeky! Congratulations 🥳
Congratulations. First place, so well deserved. I feel like someone who just watched a friend cross the finish line first.
You did a good job
This was good. Congratulations!
You did it, Dana! Congratulations!
Good job congratulations