Celestial ring
Wrought by a forgotten race
Walk their memory
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Jonathan Lawrence
Haiku writer.
When life gives you ink, make penstrokes.
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A simple poem that holds profound beauty within.
A simple yet powerful poem! The idea of walking in the footsteps of a forgotten race adds a reflective, almost reverent tone. Well done!
Stunning 🤩 what a beautiful piece!