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Peds Trauma

By N.J. Gallegos Published about a year ago 1 min read
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The parents' anguished screams tear through the hallway, reverberations of pure pain

Geysers of blood spurt from the ragged wound, a macabre Old Faithful

Pennies, dirty copper, fills my nostrils, twisting my guts

Gloved fingers slip and slide against pearly ribs, probing collapsed honeycombed lung, threading plastic through sinew

But Death claims us all, snatching the boy from me, and defeat tastes worse than any poison, forever lingering on my palate

heartbreak

About the Creator

N.J. Gallegos

Howdy! I’m an horror-loving ER doc/author. Voted most witty in high school so I’m like, super funny. Author of The Broken Heart and The Fatal Mind! Follow me on Twitter @DrSpooky_ER.

Check me out: https://njgallegos.com

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  • Badhan Senabout a year ago

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  • Testabout a year ago

    love this piece

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