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Grow With the Dough

Metaphor for Life

By DeEtta MillerPublished 2 years ago 1 min read

Grow With the Dough

A Metaphor for Life

By: DeEtta Miller

I’ve never met a metaphor

I did not like

So here is another

From a 50’s tyke

I’m very old

So, you may not know

Our favorite snack

Was raw cookie dough

Not surprising

Cookie dough can be grand

But if you got caught

A slap on the hand

To eat mother’s cookies

In their raw, chewy state

Was considered a crime

But we just couldn’t wait!

So, we learned to be sneaky

While she talked on the phone

Loading pockets with dough

Then hiding all alone

Pulling soft gooey sweetness

From chocolate-stained clothing

Denying my siblings

With faces of loathing

But I did it, I did it!

I got more than my share

Sitting in darkness

I just didn’t care…

Six decades have passed

Since I filled my young tummy

Three siblings are gone

Including our Mommy

Cooked or raw

Childhood dough was a test

Who could sneak the most

Who was the best

Why must everything

A contest be

To share is better

How can we not see?

Now when I bake

The dough lacks it thrill

If only I could share

Well, one day I will…

Family

About the Creator

DeEtta Miller

Found my "Voice" as a college student of forty-seven. Once a memoir was written, fiction, poetry and non-fiction became my passions.

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  • Badhan Senabout a year ago

    So Fantastic Oh My God❤️Brilliant & Mind Blowing Your Story ❤️ Please Read My Stories and Subscribe Me

  • Gregory Paytonabout a year ago

    Of course they didn't make "Cookie Dough", a flavor for nothing. I think all kids liked the cookie dough better than the cookies themselves. I know I did.

  • Thank you soooo much! How kind...

  • Manisha Dhalani2 years ago

    I love this!

  • Thank you, Mark! You make me laugh... yea, that raw dough is awesome! Love your input!

  • Mark Graham2 years ago

    Great work and I really like raw cookie dough and now I get cookie dough ice cream and love that it really tastes the same as cookie dough.

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