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Ground Control to Major John

No life, just dust

By Marie381Uk Published 12 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Ground Control to Major John

Ground control, this is Major John,

I’ve touched down, the journey’s done.

I see before me a dusty sea,

A barren world, but wild and free.

Red horizons stretch to the sky,

A silent planet where echoes die.

The air is thin, but the dust is thick,

Rolling like waves, a rusty trick.

The ground is cracked, a broken skin,

Yet here I stand, new worlds to spin.

No trees, no life, just endless sand,

But in this silence, I understand.

I report all I can see,

A landscape lost in mystery.

Mars, a ghost of what could be,

A planet, vacant nothing lives

fact or fictionFree Verseperformance poetry

About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran12 months ago

    Oooo, this was so fascinating! So well done!

  • Komal12 months ago

    Fantastic!

  • Karan w. 12 months ago

    This is wonderful✨

  • Alex H Mittelman 12 months ago

    Amazing poem! Great work! You’re an amazing poet!

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