
Ground Control to Major John
Ground control, this is Major John,
I’ve touched down, the journey’s done.
I see before me a dusty sea,
A barren world, but wild and free.
Red horizons stretch to the sky,
A silent planet where echoes die.
The air is thin, but the dust is thick,
Rolling like waves, a rusty trick.
The ground is cracked, a broken skin,
Yet here I stand, new worlds to spin.
No trees, no life, just endless sand,
But in this silence, I understand.
I report all I can see,
A landscape lost in mystery.
Mars, a ghost of what could be,
A planet, vacant nothing lives
About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️
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Comments (4)
Oooo, this was so fascinating! So well done!
Fantastic!
This is wonderful✨
Amazing poem! Great work! You’re an amazing poet!