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With a hollow heart
You’ll find you can keep going
Long after you can’t
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Ahh, so sad, but carries such truth. Well done!
Sadly, that's the only thing we can do!
Poignantly put. Great work!
But oh, the emptiness, numbly moving on.
Hey, just letting you know I shared this poem in my story Poppy's Preferences: https://shopping-feedback.today/journal/poppy-s-preferences-pt-5%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
This is such a great message. Well done
Good one! I could see this on a greeting card or T-shirt. It says so much.
Sometimes we're just propelled by the will to move on, even if we feel that we've got nothing left to live for. Instinct isn't a unique trait, but more often than not it's a necessary one. Paradise isn't always promised, but we'll never know if we stop to lie down. Sometimes, it's important to keep moving, just for the sake of it, if not ourselves.
Very relatable, hearted and subscribe. Cannot wait to read more of your stories 💗♥️
Very moving. Thank you.
Incredibly poignant
Touching!
Wonderful, emotional work, and this definitely qualifies!! 😍😍
This is "timely." Well done!
I can feel this. Well done.
it qualifies as so well done and fact, beautiful Lorene 😀
Fantastic, absolutely fantastic!!!💕💕💖
Oh my. This is beautiful. Well done
Oh goodness, this says so much. I can relate. Beautiful work :)
I feel this