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I look up, I cry,
I see your face in the sky,
Just can’t say, “goodbye”!!
Grief is the harshest emotion to invade our souls, thank you for reading 😀
About the Creator
Moe Radosevich
I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you
Write on my friends
Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insight
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions


Comments (11)
That it is, grief is painful. Sending you healing vibes, take one day at a time.
Grief is exactly that! My brother died unexpectedly in Sep and I am grieving, so this hit home. 💔Superb poem.
This was so poignant and emotional. Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️
Poignantly penned!!!
That's so true. Beautifully done.
Grief is a never ending river sometimes. Lingeringly lovely and haunting haiku.
Wonderful job Moe! Sorry 4 your loss my friend...
Wow. So powerful- good luck in the challenge!
True imagery of grief
It is such a strange and difficult beast. Beautifully written, Moe :)
I definitely felt this one... Grief is hard.