You say my freckles are like stars
For once, I see them as they are:
Windows to my truest face
Not giveaways of my disgrace
.
So many times I’ve looked at me
In fear of what the world would see
But all this time, I’ve been alive–
Never been here just to survive
.
If I said it, no one would believe
How long it took to start to breathe
A life, passed in contentedness
But never in the present tense
.
Always anywhere but here
Avoiding my own gaze in fear
Of whom (or lack thereof) I’d see:
But she was always here. In me
.
How can time move in a circle?
Can colors change before your eyes?
Can you wake up to find
You’ve always been right here, before the lies?
.
Orbiting around the sun
As clear as daylight through the trees–
It’s been within me all along.
My center of gravity
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Comments (7)
what a beautiful and an ever present 'so close so far' all at once but feeling. But ready to have it all gone in a second.
Your poem is absolutely captivating. Your words have touched me deeply. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of poetry!!! 🥰💕
This was so gorgeous and uplifting! I absolutely loved it!
This is beautiful and inspiring. It can take a lot for your true sense of self to emerge. 💖 That has been my experience.
Ah Joelle... what a beautiful, sweet feel this piece has to it. Strength with humility. Love it 💙
This was such beautiful verse! Nothing is worse than the feeling of hiding who you are and feeling inauthentic, I know that from experience. This poem was great!
So thoughtful and I felt some real emotions packed in this lovely poem. There’s no place like the present and this poem really made me feel in the moment. Thanks for sharing.