Grandma’s House
A sensational journey through a memory from Grandmas House for the sensational II challenge

Gritty cold hardwood planks hurt my knees and ankles as I crawl around.
Bleach meets coffee, while Spanish spices and fragrances of fresh laundry dance in the foreground, they tickle my nostrils fighting for dominance, simultaneously creating a unique scent that one would have to smell.
My own cries and whines reverberate through the house, I can’t talk yet, but I want a drink, and she can tell.
With a soft hush my tiny hands find hot coffee in a baby bottle, the warmth slightly burns, but feels soothing at the same time, and the fact that I’m scooped up in Grandmas warm embrace only adds to the taste.
A soft rubber nipple gives way to a sugary Java explosion, as I suck and nibble, Im greeted with flavors so potent, sweet with just a hint of bitter, it’s a treat grandma only gave me this winter.
She lifts me up and through wide baby eyes, I see her face; wrinkled, hard, and chiseled, worn like a statue past it’s seasons, her smile faint and forced, but sincere, even after all these years it’s amazing how I can close my eyes and still see her.



Comments (2)
Gosh this was soooo emotional! You nailed this so perfectly!
What an amazing response to the given prompt! Nothing and no one is quite as special as Abuelita and her wondrous, magical ways! 🩵🩵