Their hands cup my heart
My soul enshrined in their eyes
My life made worthwhile
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Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
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Adorable grandkids!!! Brilliantly and beautifully penned Senryu!!!
Awww, this was so sweet and they're so adorable!
I was lucky to be blessed with two more last week and your words capture all these moments so beautifully!
Love the photographs and your perfectly succinct and beautiful words. Excellent senryu, Andrew!
Adorable little cuties!! They've stolen my heart!
Beautiful haiku