Goodbye I am gone
Valentine shock in 50 loving words.
By Marie381Uk Published 12 months ago • 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025
she told me tonight
She is up tha duff.
I can’t give up my freedom.
I enjoy no ties,
I like my nights out,
Footy and curried trout.
Marriage would be prison
there’s is no doubt.
How do I say No.
My bags are packed
Valentine day over,
Am gone.
About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️
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Comments (6)
A wonderful follow-up to your first poem. Creatively written.
Excellent
This honest and raw perspective on commitment really stands out, even if it’s a bit unconventional!
Not sure those 50 words are loving. But they do send a message.. About a shallow, self serving narcissist incapable of being a man, much less a Dad. Spotlight on. Great job.
Lovely words
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