Don't make of me a case in point
or define me as a jewel.
I'm not a thing you need anoint
as an exception to the rule.
.
I'm not a one-off centre piece
or brightly shining star.
Compare me not to say Matisse
or call me objet dart.
.
Give me not your accolades
I need them not to shine.
Send me not on escapades
that to a hero you'd assign.
.
I'm a pillar not a pedestal.
I'm good but not incredible.
.
© Tim Grace, 26 November 2010 (Revised March 2022)
About the Creator
Tim Grace
A first impression has a lasting effect - it makes a notable difference. In a subtle way that’s who I am as a poet. A ‘first impression’ looking for the gentle ‘twist’ that draws attention to a novel observation.
Comments (1)
To the reader: The burden of expectation is a heavy weight. The mild-mannered super hero is a case in point. Encumbered with a sense of conviction, the archetypal hero bears the load of over-whelming duty. When released of expectation the hero, as centre-piece, is freed of others' expectations. It's the pillar not the pedestal that bears weight and distributes the load. To the poet: Pulling apart a poem reveals a poet's word play. Throughout this poem, rhythm falls heavily on the word 'not'; as repeated in alternating lines. The opening word is 'don't' and from this point on the emphasis is clear: 'I'm good but not incredible'. The words might say 'don't' but they are expressed with determination and conviction; heroic traits indeed.