Gone, but here to stay.
**
We lived out a fantasy,
You and me.
I just had to try 18 before we ran away.
But you couldn't wait for the light in the darkness.
Instead, you gave in to the dark, and now you're gone.
**
Here to stay is your love and memory.
I turn 18 this week.
But we will never be this fantasy of you and me.
Because you are gone, here to stay is my forbidden love for you,
my friend
my mentor.
My lover, you are gone but here to stay.
Isn't that just the way?
About the Creator
Jazzy
Follow on IG @jazzygoncalves
Head of the Jazzy Writers Association (JWA) in partnership with the Vocal HWA chapter.
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Comments (4)
Achingly beautiful. Well done.
Great heartfelt writing! I just noticed you have a couple of books coming out! Congrats. That is exciting. Good luck with that. 👍😊
This is the most heartbreaking kinda love. Felt it in every bone in ny body. Amazing poem!
Damn, felt this one! I love the flow and I'm a sucker for repetition! Love it!