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Goldfinch Demise

Haiku

By Andrea Corwin Published about a year ago 1 min read
Author’s Bird Buddy photo

There he lay on the

gravel, sadly, lifeless now

dead Papa Goldfinch

** Today I found a dead male goldfinch; I have no idea what caused his death. It might have been a building strike or an attack by a cat or hawk. His mate and fledged babies might miss him or not. I know a female is nesting again. 🥲

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Andrea Corwin

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  • C. Rommial Butler9 months ago

    Well-wrought! This pic makes it seem as if our feathered friend is smiling! I catch sight of them around here, flitting in and out of bushes. Nature did not give them the best camouflage...

  • Rowan Finley about a year ago

    Beautiful!

  • Dawnxisoul393artabout a year ago

    Your haiku captures a poignant moment of loss with striking simplicity, evoking a sense of quiet sadness and the beauty of nature's delicate balance, excellent work, love it, thanks for sharing!

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    An emotional one. Loved it!

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    Goldfinches are such pretty birds and it is sad to see them dead, but that is a life of taking chances as birds do.

  • This is soooo sadddd 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

  • Mama Magdaleneabout a year ago

    RIP 😢💔🐤

  • angela hepworthabout a year ago

    So sad 😭

  • Karen Coady about a year ago

    It is a hard hard world out there for birds.

  • Lana V Lynxabout a year ago

    Poor birdie.

  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    Hey, sad to hear this.He's at peace now.

  • D. J. Reddallabout a year ago

    You have made his memory indelible herein. What finer tribute could there be?

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