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Girl Scout Burn

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Girl Scout Burn
Photo by Marianna Smiley on Unsplash

We would tread carefully on the bridge of our future

Making sure it was stable

As a young Girl Scout

I would love to sing the Friendship Song:

“Make new friends, but keep the old.

One is silver; the other is gold.

A circle is round; it has no end.

That’s how long I will be your friend.”

I remember it when I was a fresh daisy who was used to being fed sunshine and rain

But now I see the sun, it’s dark spots pervading my soul

The deepest red you can find

So boiling and so reckless

Not even the freshest spring can overcome it.

You played me like a fool

And dumped me to the curb

You and I had a Girl Scout connection

I thought you knew that too without words

That no matter what, we’d stay true

But you gave me a burn

A certified Girl Scout burn

heartbreak

About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock2 years ago

    I'm so sorry. I never knew how to hold on.

  • Grz Colm2 years ago

    This was a sad one, but authentic and well -written Melissa! 👍☹️

  • This broke my heart so much. I think most of us have experienced this. We would have thought we had such a deep connection with someone, only for them to prove us wrong. Sending you lots of love and hugs Merly! 🥺❤️

  • Mariann Carroll2 years ago

    its sad to have a friendship betrayal

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