Come on out, it’s time
Celebrating isn’t a crime
We’ll party on my dime
The night is sublime
Don’t let the party stop
It’s time to pop the top
Let's go and be-bop
Shebang till they call a cop
Raise your cup high
Say cheers to the sky
I’m not ready to say bye
Why don’t you come on by
Beginning at twilight
We’ll dance into the night
Wearing our skirts skin-tight
Until the morning’s light
There’s no time for you to pout
Come on, let’s hear your shout
Raving is what it’s all about
So why don’t you come on out
Let your luxurious hair down
It’s time to run around town
There’ll be no time to frown
We’ll all wear a golden crown
Feet pounding the dance floor
Bodies twirling around for more
Until we’re tired to our core
Becoming the weekend’s lore
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What a fun read it brings you back in time. nicely done!
i'd love to run around town with you! this one was a fun reminder of the ol' college days...and the occasional friday night 😉
Wow, your images match the words so well! Does AI have any regular looking young women, old women? Thank you for sharing. My friends never looked that good when we were out together. And we certainly don't now!😉😂🥲🥰
We all need an adventure because the best nights out always are and this little poem made me long for the next one. Great job mum
Well, that sounded like a night to remember. A fun read, MC!
This has a fun rhythm to it. And love that last line - kind feels like it's saying whatever happened on the weekend, stays on the weekend, haha. Are you the partying type, MC? 💛
Just terrific, Step Mom: But, truth be told, I'm just into subtle brunets that aren't always showing-off their stuff. I hate to admit it, but I actually was jealous when 'Dudes' looked at Rita Louise sideways: Wonder if she ever noticed that I did that?..Hmm! My Best - J -
Oooo, I especially loved the beat this had. I sang it to my own tune hehehe.
Sounds like a fun night. 🪩💃
Ahh this sounds like a lot of fun. I love the images.
Sounds like fun. Let's go!
This was fun MC!! Your vivid imagery paired with the pictures through out really made this an immersive poem!!
I was bopping to the beat of the words. Great poem!
It's Monday morning, but I really want a girls night out now!