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Girl please

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By Erica WilliamsPublished 18 days ago 1 min read
Girl please
Photo by Brock Wegner on Unsplash

In truth ;

Your words don't mean shit to me,

As it don't make my hair grown ,

Nor it doesn't make my drink,

I bottled it up too long for to make ya'll be a think piece,

Talking all that shit won't make you famous,

Girl fuck you and your trailer park and that so called skylight house you got,

It don't and won't make you King,

I don't give a fuck if it makes your ass fall in niggas laps ,

Oh that it makes you datable for rich man,

Who the fuck cares ?;

Not me.

The bottom line Allah is still King,

He still runs the Universe,

Makes you still ask Him for help when in need,

What you mean you're better than me?,

We not better than each other nor Him,

Nor it makes you wetter for the next nigga;

Tuh,

Fuck you talking ' bout ?

performance poetry

About the Creator

Erica Williams

I am a knitter , crocheter and I love to write. i am bron and raised on the South Side of Saint Louis, Missouri ( Go Cards !!) aandddd I love writing poetry.

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  • James14 days ago

    Hello, I had two insight comments posted, but deleted for cause. First, I opted for "Nice work" and "Very well written. Keep up the good work!" and then "Compelling and original writing" and "Creative use of language & vocab". Under the "How is my writing" category, I chose the "Nice work" option, which states " Very well written. Keep up the good work!". Of course, this is the middle option, as far as connotative and denotative. The fact is, I can not agree to the poem being "Very well written". Honestly, I have no idea if it is "Very well written". However, I agree with "Keep up the good work!" because, writing is good work. Next, I preferred the first half of the insights comment, as follows: "Compelling and original writing". Assuredly, the writing is superiorly compelling, and by all accounts, original. Lastly, I disagree with the final comment : "Creative use of language & vocab". In commenting most nicely, I do not believe the writing is "Creative use of language & vocab". Agreeably, the writing does have a unique use of language and vocabulary, but, there is a lacking of creativity. Ms Williams, keep it good work and , please don't stop writing!!!!

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