Girl
Gal
Gorgeous
Generous
Gratification
Giving garden goods gratefully.
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Gail
Grin
Gallant
Gifted gal
Gained given good grades
Graduated Geologist.
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Writer's Notes: Love the letter G! The letter G sounds like "gee!" G is the letter used in this Tautogram for the Vocal media challenge. A reminder, in a Tautogram, all the words begin with the same letter. GIRL was written for the Tautogram Challenge.
Are you familiar with the format used in GIRL? The Fibonacci poem format sequence is 1-1-2-3-5-8. The numbers equal the syllables in each line. The six-line poem has a total of twenty syllables.
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Babs Iverson
Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.
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Comments (26)
Nicely done, Babs! 💕🙂
Really lovely!!! Great Tautogram!
Wonderful work Babs!!
You go Girl! Loved this one and the explanation of the structure. Kudos!
Awesome, Babs!
The was brilliant 🥰
Super impressed you were able to craft your Tautogram into another poetic format!
Fantastic, love the Fibonacci structure!
I'm so happy to see you write a Fibonacci again! I loved this!
I love the way you formatted the poem. Quite beautiful. I wish you the most luck in the contest!
Nicely done. Autobiographical perchance? I hate to have to point this out, but the fifth line in the first stanza, "Gains gratification" has six syllables, not five. (I wince as I type that. Please don't hurt me.)
Great!!😊💕
I must try that format one day. Gifted gal you wrote about!
Love this and the strong ending ❤️🤗
Pretty smart girl/gal. Gee this is great.
Fun Tautogram/fibanacci Girl! 🥰
Love the Fibonacci inclusion!
Great job! Very creative with the format and glad you explained it. I learned something new!
This is wonderful
Wow, Babs. Way to go above and beyond with Your taut tautogram. Lamar made a quad-ku for the letter C and You made yours into a Fibonacci. Superb.
Good one✨💖😉
Thank you for sharing your tautogram poem "GIRL" and explaining the Fibonacci poem format sequence. It's great to see how you incorporated both formats in your piece. Keep up the good work!
This is very cute!
How cool and also wow, that’s a complex poem!
Excellent