Ghost
a breakup love poem
Sneaky,
how the time has changed us. We
used to be an “absolutely”—
kindred spirits & best friends.
Now, I don’t even know you. The
“you” I knew is now
a ghost—
a vintage,
distant trend.
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-Gina C. 🧚🏻♀️✨
About the Creator
Gina C.
Poet | Author | Architect of Worlds
Sowing stories rooted in culture, origin, metamorphosis, resilience, language & love via fantasy, myth, magical realism & botanical prose
Writing my novel!🧚🏻♀️🐉✨
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A Dart at Dusk
Seconds ago, the sullen sun set on the two of us… my exuberant furry companion and me. A fresh breeze embraces us, delivering welcome relief from the day’s oppressive heat. His typical stumbling and staggering along — apace with a sloth — has turned into trip-trapping, high-stepping, almost skipping along.
By Angie the Archivist 📚🪶3 days ago in Petlife
Comments (8)
I like this one a lot. It really feels like that sometimes. Excellent work! 👏
You're a weaver of words. Sneaky, absolutely, I don't know you,... trend. Love your loom!
The person we love never exists, is ever a ghost ♥
Goodness, that's so sadly relatable. Beautiful work!!
Eventually, that's what people become. Loved this so much!
I love this heartfelt nonet that is so reflective of so many types of breakups.
Bittersweet.
Aww, so sad. You're killing it with this challenge. Well done, my friend.