Fungus Among Us
I had to put these photos somewhere, I hope you enjoy these haikus ♥️
There goes the lines drawn
Between colour before stars
Mushrooms lay in wait
While the clouds swim by
Colours hidden behind grey
Fading when dark comes
A/N: Those colours in the sky creeped upon us. We watched it fade too. Somewhere around here we saw the mushrooms and in our excitement we took some photos. I would’ve loved if you all were there, the golf course is big enough for all of us. Although this was short, I do appreciate it so much if you got this far 🙏♥️
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Caitlin Charlton
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Such beautiful haikus . And enjoy the pictures you shared. Nature is so so beautiful.
I love that both haikus subtly reference the transition to night when mushrooms in secret blossom from the soil. Loved the photos too!
Lovely Haikus you wrote there Caitlin, and I enjoyed your pictures as well!😊
Omgggg, your photos are soooo pretty! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 Loved your Haikus as well!
Splendid! I wish I had this amazing talent of photography 🤯✨ Your poem feels ***complete*** with your amazing pictures ✨💕
Absolutely stunning photo! You have an incredible talent for capturing beauty, Caitlin. And I must say, that haiku was a amazing 👏✨
This is simply amazing girl..but I must say I love the photos 😘
Nicely worded! I enjoyed the photos too! :))
Really enjoyed the embedded video. It was lovely seeing the inspiration for such a lovely haiku.
Ooh. Awesome pics, and great haikus too
Those first two lines are so wonderful you can apply anything for the third line.
Beautiful pics
Oh...lovely pictures and lovely haiku! I love this a lot, Caitlin; well done!