A wheel is frozen in place.
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A perpetual moment stuck in time.
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Icicles hanging delicately from the wood.
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Cold temperatures keep everything completely preserved.
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Damp wood swelled in the ice.
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Brown grass is asleep til spring.
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Bare tree branches behind the mill.
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A creek that sleeps in winter.
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A cold that seeps into bones.
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A frozen beauty in nature’s majesty.
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Red shingled roof protecting the mill.
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A wheel waiting for its turn.
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Comments (8)
Beautifully descriptive. Well done.
Very vivid. Love it!
This is stunning, Combs! Fantastic! 💓🌟
Wow, only you can write such a beautiful poem about a frozen wheel! I love it!
This was just lovely and the ending line! Wow!!
Ouuu, this is beautiful. I have to agree with JBaz, that last line is lovely. 💗
Oh I like that last line That was a nice touch
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