From Two Cups
Nonet Breakup Challenge
By Rilee AreyPublished 2 years ago • Updated 2 years ago • 1 min read
Photo by Ingrid Hall on Unsplash
I used to buy each of us coffee,
But now, my wallet will thank me,
As I remain half-empty,
I stare at my foam art,
Missing a huge part,
Of my weak heart,
From two cups,
To once,
Loved.
About the Creator
Rilee Arey
I am a professional life romantizer, with a heart that feels everything deeply. I am a moment collector through words and the ways around us.
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Comments (4)
I loved this; with or without "enough".
Paul caught it... And I'm admitting now that I'm glad you did not write about two girls with one cup... 😳
Excellent take on the challenge and I agree with Paul
This is beautiful and a unique take on the challenge and a break-up. Take or leave the little editing advice - enough is 2 syllables. Apart from that though, it is stunning!